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hippiematt
02-14-2008, 06:07 PM
made this at school

boy: I love you so much
girl: no i love you
boy: want to go the the corner store
girl: ummm sure but my father is going to get upset if Im late so we got to hurry up
boy: ok
boy: What?
boy: you expect me to buy you something
girl: ..well...kinda?
boy: im just playing.
girl: oh i knew you werent that cheap lol
boy: well i got you a gift *pulls out a rose*
girl: look what I got you
girl: *pulls put heart shaped box*
boy: awww you didnt have to
girl: well ill do anything for you
both *blush*
boy: well you know what would be nice righ about now
*cough* cough*
girl: what?
boy: a little kiss
boy: *makes kissey face*
boy:You know im kid... she kissed me on my lip.
boy:im staring into space and i fall
just then she falls
boy: what happend to you?
Then I noticed she was bleeding.
she had blood coming out.
I didnt know what to do.
I said to her im supposed to die not you
The guy from the corner store came out and called the abulance
later on she was prasumed dead
was the kiss to shock me and to fall or was it by accident?
I couldnt tell and I can never tell
I cryed all night
I opened hers gift and read it over and over again
It read
"happy valentine I will never leave your side your love

http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh143/amyscutepics/valentineletter.png
jimmer45khb
02-14-2008, 06:12 PM
That was a sad sad story but a good lesson never take love for granted ever you never know what you have till you lose it
SASUKE GURL
02-14-2008, 06:15 PM
aww...:'[
thats sad...
hippiematt
02-14-2008, 06:17 PM
That was a sad sad story but a good lesson never take love for granted ever you never know what you have till you lose it
very true :)
Kata
02-14-2008, 06:18 PM
Awww. *tear trickles* Why make a sad poem..or story...or whatever?
hippiematt
02-14-2008, 06:23 PM
Awww. *tear trickles* Why make a sad poem..or story...or whatever?

i was bored at school i was think of making it ALOT sader but i dont want to make anyone really cry i think i can make an soap opera lol
jimmer45khb
02-14-2008, 06:29 PM
i was bored at school i was think of making it ALOT sader but i dont want to make anyone really cry i think i can make an soap opera lol

Yeah you could lol
Linked
02-14-2008, 09:06 PM
Anything can be a soap opera, you should throw red paint onto a white canvas and then put this story next to it and call it "an soul searching exploration into the pain of lost love and love lost". Which would take its value from worthless to millions of dollars; I love modern art.
tenkaichymaster
02-14-2008, 09:08 PM
Just adequate for the season....
hippiematt
02-14-2008, 09:41 PM
Anything can be a soap opera, you should throw red paint onto a white canvas and then put this story next to it and call it "an soul searching exploration into the pain of lost love and love lost". Which would take its value from worthless to millions of dollars; I love modern art.
one life to blah i like the sound of that lol:)